The Elderly. Monolog by Felicia (Avanzado 2, 2012-13)
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Great beginning incl. pron.
and WISDOM /wísdom/
they're a LARGE part of it
They're not taken into account AS THEY SHOULD / enough
The role they have AMONG us is…
/sapórt/ - support
They can take care of their GRANDchildren (?)
They can DO a lot of things for us (or HELP US IN NUMEROUS WAYS)
They can help businesses KEEP GOING IN OFF SEASON PERIODS, going on trips in low seasons...
another kind of stuff??? - "stuff" is informal. Did you mean "and this kind of things" or "and that kind of thing"...?
THIS last stage of their liveS
spending time with other PEOPLE (not + s)
you are going to need help from OTHER PEOPLE
remain in your house (also, MANAGE BY YOURSELF/ON YOUR OWN)
IN CASE you need
Another option could be HOME CARE (not "the")
who liveD / USED TO LIVE
She had problemS to REMEMBER that she WAS in DIFFERENT place
Excellent in self-correction!
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